Research for school

[Paulien van Mourik]

Hey guys,

This year I'm in the last year of (the Dutch equivalent of) high school. Every student has to make an extensive paper on a subject, preferably something they're interested in. Since I love music and double basses, I decided to write about the influence of the double bass on the history of music. I used books such as a history of the double bass by Paul Brun and an introduction to the double bass by Raymond Edgar.

Now that we've had to hand in our first versions, I'd like to show you mine and ask you what you think of it. I'm sure you'll recognize some references as being from one of those books, but in my source list I'll give them all the credit for it There's also some language that you'll probably categorize as 'weird', and I'm sure you'll file some information under 'wrong'.

What I'm kindly requesting you to do is read a little of it (not all 17 pages) and comment on these weirdnesses and wrongnesses. If you don't want to, thats okay Please if you do find the time, comment a little, thanks a lot!